Scene 40

 Waterfront Park-night

Wide Shot of Phantom Peak sign with roses all around. 

Erik and Louise enter the scene and smile at the sign. 

Erik picks up a rose and hands it to Louise. 

ERIK

Louise dear, what should I do? Should I take the mask off or leave it on? It’s the greatest gift anyone could give me.

Louise looks to her left as Jessica walks to the scene. L.S.

JESSICA

Erik and

 Louise I am so glad that dreams do come true, that love is stronger than anything. I just wanted to drop by and give you my blessings, before I go home.  I guess I should have believed your story about the Phantom when you told me. I hope we can all be friends?

Louise (hugs Jessica and whispers in her ear.) 

(over the shoulder shot.)

Always.

Jessica looks at Erik and smiles. 

JESSICA

Whatever you chose, we’ll always love you. I’ll see you both tomorrow.

Jessica waves and exits the scene.

Medium Shot of Erik and Louise standing by the sign. 

(Fade out)

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Waterfront Park-night

Louise smiles at Erik. 

LOUISE

Whatever you chose I’ll always love you.

Erik looks up at the sky while he holds Louise’s hand.

ERIK

Thanks, but no thanks boss. I know beauty is on the inside now and most importantly, I have learned to love myself. A new face would be wonderful, but being loved and having love for you is the greatest love of all. I don’t need to hide

 from the world anymore.

Medium Shot of Louise and Erik hugging. 

E.C.U Shot of Erik’s hand letting go of the mask. 

Medium Shot of mask falling towards the ground. 

E.C.U. Shot of mask with rose. 

THEEND

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